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Review:accioHPFF says:
I am finally trying to catch up with reading and reviewing this! Here goes...

I'll start with the folder because, of course, that's the main part of this chapter. It's interesting because as well as incriminating them, you give reasons as to why they are involved. I'm not sure how Lily has come to be in possession of this information, but I'm sure the plot will thicken soon enough!

Teddy and Victoire? I wonder what's going on there! I hope it's nothing serious, but obviously it must be if St. Mungo's sent Harry and Ron a message about it. I also think you did a great job writing as Harry and Ron, because in my eyes, they're very difficult to write.

The extra details, like Lily's boyfriend being french and hating magic, are all little things that are really effective in making the story more interesting. Great job!

Author's Response: SCOTTEH!

YES, THE FOLDER! The plot will thicken... (hopefully) and yes, sadly, Teddy and Vic aren't very happy at all :(

Also, OMG, yes! The trio are so hard to write! :)

Thanks so much for the review, Scott! *hugs*

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