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Review:Erised says:
What a great start to the story I've heard so much about! This opens up about a million questions in my brain, all of which I'm sure will be answered later but for now provides an excellent incentive to continue reading. I have no idea who the two characters are, but at this point I don't think I want to know because not knowing makes the whole thing so much more mysterious.

There's a wonderful balance between tension and pace, so that it's not all on-the-edge-of-your-seat but it also doesn't lose its intensity. The relationship between the two seems like a kind of destructive one, whoever they are, which I can't wait to find out about later.

You end the chapter/prologue excellently too, providing a further hook for the reader. I love it! I can't wait to read more.

Well done!

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