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Review:Maybe says:
Aw, so sweet. I really love how Neville was portrayed in this one-shot: "unexpectedly normal." Just ordinary Neville. I think it's very easy to make Neville into this war hero who is so idolised and, while I think he deserves his glory, we have to remember that Neville is still Neville. The references you made to him asking Hannah to the Yule Ball and reading about the Founders and drinking the substandard coffee just screams classic Neville and it brings home how the war hasn't changed him at his core. I thought this was really lovely, especially the fact that Hannah is Neville's saviour too.


Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad you liked the ordinary feel here, because that's exactly what I was going for. I imagine that if anyone were to fall easily into a "normal" life following the second war, it would be Neville, and I'm glad he and Hannah can have a few moments of peace now. It's lovely that you liked his characterization :)

Thanks for this sweet review!


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