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Review:alicia and anne says:
Oh wow! This was amazing!
The way you described Percy's feelings was just ... there's no words for how well you've done this.. I got gooesbumps!
I have never read a Percy story before but I'm so glad that I started with yours, the breathtaking brilliance of your desriptions made how he felt just so vivid in my mind, you could see how he felt like he needed to prove something better then his brothers and how he had been quick to believe everyone's lies. And how he felt at the end when everything came crashing down on him, My favourite part was when you described how the ladder was made with the bones of the innocent. That was just so immense!
Brilliant just brilliant, you are such a fantastic writer to get these feelings across with such few words. Did you win the challenge? I really hope you did :D

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this! I think that, for me personally, it's pretty easy to get into Percy's head because I identify with a LOT of what he goes through in the books. I've definitely had feelings of being overlooked and ignored in my family, of wanting to stick out, and it's almost like I can learn from it -- to watch out, before I go the same way.

I wrote this one-shot in a little over an hour or so, so all your compliments are basically tenfold in my eyes. :D For some reason, my quick-writes somehow end up being my most mellifluous and stylistic. Who knows why that is?

Gahh, you are immensely sweet. ♥ Thank you so much for taking the time to review this, and I'm very flattered to play host to your first Percy story! :)

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