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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums here to review for you! :D So, let's go over things:

Grammar/Spelling: The only issue that I really noticed was in Frank's diary. You used the word "defiled" instead of "defied." But that's the only problem I saw!

Plot: Let's start here, okay? I actually cried! That's definitely saying something. I very rarely cry during stories. This one was magnificent though. I loved Frank's diary entry. I loved how proud he was of Neville. And it was endlessly sad knowing that he never saw his son grow up like he wanted to...Man, seriously, I CRIED. Whoa. :] Great job.

Characterization: Neville and Augusta were perfect. I adored when Neville encouraged Harry and when he was waiting to see if his grandmother was on his side. Great job showing him finding his bravery. I think you hit it spot-on. And Gran was great as well.

Descriptions: I think you did a great job bringing readers into the story. I really got a great vibe from seeing the different places and feelings the emotions. EMOTIONS. WOW. I absolutely could feel what Neville was feeling. This story made me wish we could see the series from Neville's point of view.

Interactions: I think my favorite moment between characters was when Neville was supporting Harry in King's Cross. It was such a believable moment, and I think it was pivotal to the story. I also loved the quiet conversations between Neville and his grandmother. Wonderfully done.

Style: I really loved your style. This had something that just brought me into it and let me hear what was happening without smacking me in the face. And you brought in the different prompts really well.

I think you did spectacularly. I'm sorry I don't have much criticism. You did a great job. :D


Author's Response: Alright so right now I'm too busy floating over the highest clouds reading and re-reading your review. Awww I made you cry? *Hugs* Sorry about that. To be honest I cried whole writing. So there you go :D

Thank you thank you thank you so very much for the lovely review Emily :D It really really made my day... I mean night :D Thank you so much.

If I ever write anything like this, I'll let you know.


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