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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
As a mother, this scene in my head would be my worst nightmare. Being told my son is in danger with a huge powerful wizard coming after them but I think you've done really well with this without deliberately trying to make people cry!

I love the urgency of Sirius in this, his rage and his anger all coming together into one to try and protect his best friend who is almost like his brother and his godson. I can just imagine him volunteering himself to be the secret keeper and I do truly believe that he would rather die than betray his friends within this.

Lily's motherly love is almost heartbreaking here because it goes against the grain to still be in the line of danger, for everyone to know where they are but for them just to be hidden, the idea of them holing up somewhere abroad with the fidelius charm would be much more satisfying.

James is just... so cute... saying nothing will happen to Harry. I'd love to believe him in this and it's so bittersweet because I know exactly what will happen in the end.

Well done with this though

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!!
I'm so glad the emotions came off as real since I was only guessing!

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