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Review:adluvshp says:
Aww this was such a sweet little story. At first I couldn't quite understand who was who, but towards the end, I understood. I absolutely love the second paragraph of the story where you describe Neville. That is just so sweet. I really like how they're each other's saviours. I think that's a beautiful reference too. The 'flashbacks' into how Neville and she first got together were a nice touch to the story too.
I really liked this story, it was short and sweet, and a cute snippet into their lives.
Your writing was perfect as always, with great flow and pace, and no grammatical errors!
Good job!
10/10
Cheers!
AD

Slytherin for the Cup 2012!

Author's Response: Hey AD!

I'm really glad you liked this little one-shot! I really tried to convey the simplicity of Hannah and Neville's relationship (as I see it) and the way that they 'save' each other in little ways every day. I'm also glad that you liked the little bit of background there to give context to their relationship. I tried not to overdo it!

Thanks for this very kind review :)

-Amanda


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