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Review:Pixileanin says:
Hi there!

I have been meaning to get to this story for the longest time, and there is no time like the present, so I cannot wait to see what you have done with this.

First off, I think it is really interesting that you managed to make this chapter coincide with a challenge. For some reason, all of my stories are connected with one or more challenges, so I understand that sometimes it is a great place to find inspiration.

You really made me cold in that first paragraph. I was completely sucked into the atmosphere. I was even thinking to myself, "Get inside, you crazy man! Why are you standing out in the elements??" But I guess that men who crave power are less than concerned about their health and more about making general impressions. Komissarov definitely made an impression on me! But get a better coat, man!

So he thinks he can do better than Grindelwald? We will see.

Uh oh, potions! Since you are setting this in the Cold War era, I imagine there will be a lot of espionage, including accidental poisonings? Hmm…

"He had a very high level of fitness."

That was an understatement. I chortled at the "hair remained perfectly in place" line. I loved that you left the revelation of the Englishman's identity until the very end of this chapter. This should be a very interesting read!

Author's Response: Hey, so glad to hear you wanted to read it, hope you're not disapointed!

I tried really hard to capture he setting, so if you felt cold then I guess it worked!

This is one of my favorite eras for fiction in general, and it's a pretty unknown era when it comes to HP canon, so I think I'm going to have some fun with this. Thanks a lot for reviewing!


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