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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
I think you have got the language of Hagrid dialect spo t on in this! As a writer its probably the one thing I find difficult to do, write accents, so its nice to know that its not impossible!

I just think you really do need to continue this story! You have written it so well, conveying Lily as quite fiesty and authoritive even before she was sorted into Gryffindor and I liked that you showed those traits in her as thats exactly what I imagine her to be like.

Oh dear the Emma and Gemma thing really did make me laugh which was a little cruel really. Also when it was said that they thought Hufflepuff was the boring house that was really sad but I'm sure everyone feels like that and that they soon settled in!

The hats song was brilliant Amy! You need to become a professional song writer or something (If being a normal writer doesn't work out!)

Well done, I loved it and you'd better update soon because I can't wait to see what Dumbledore has to say!

Author's Response: I spent so long doing Hagrid's speech! I was going through the books and trying to find certain words just to make sure it was right!!
I wish I could continue it, and I have tried several times. I just lack plot ideas and motive for it. I will keep trying though!
Once I realised the names, I just had to :P I really couldn't resist. And can you tell I wrote this after watching AVPM? ;)
I love writing songs! I just lack the ability to create the music and sing! :P
Thank you so much for the review!!


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