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Review:accioHPFF says:
Hello again!

The way you started this chapter... I was reading through the description at the start of the chapter and ended up getting more and more eager to find out what had happened. I think that was a really great way of starting it, opposed to telling the reader what was happening.

Lucy went to Matthew? My first thought at the time was "why?" Unless I missed the connection between Lucy and Matthew, I was confused as to why she would go and ask him to talk to Rose. I kind of realised that she would not go to Rose directly, nor anybody else in the family, but I was still confused as to why she chose him. I'm now wondering if she knows him from elsewhere?

Lockhart's books being used again? Oh no! I really liked the idea of the meeting between Rose, Boris and the publishers, because it seems like a great idea and I haven't read anything with that before. I hope Rose can do something about it, even if she has to ask her mother for help!

The part where Rose can't find the phonebox to the Ministry of Magic was also really good, and the response at the other end of the phone was great!

Aside from the confusion about the Lucy and Matthew situation (which may be me misreading something or reading too much into it), I loved this chapter! Great job!

Author's Response: Since when do things have to make sense? I MEAN, THERE IS TOTALLY A REASON WHY SHE DID THAT... Like the fact that Audrey and Lucy think Matthew is Rose's boyfriend, so that's probably why :D

Thank you so much! :)


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