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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Ah, another great story by the wonderful Toujours Padfoot! Your story had me sitting on the edge of my seat, but also laughing as well. I liked how you showed that Harry was really brave, going in without a second glance and then you made Ron and Neville all nervous as he did it. It showed that you really stuck to their characterization. When Neville went into the room, I started to get kind of nervous. Even though I'm a big canon fan, I liked that you made him want to become an auror like his parents. He really can be pretty brave at times and you showed that a lot through your story. The whole battle with the dragon made me laugh. Why didn't Harry make it that easy? Neville did it so well and I thought you did a good job with that scene :) I loved at the end how you had Neville make Ron all nervous by telling him if was a bunch of spiders in there. I seriously busted out laughing at that! :p You did a good job incorporating everything into your story and I'm glad you were the one who won it for Gryffindor(: It was a very deserving story! :D


Author's Response: Baww, Amanda, you leave such lovely reviews. How can I ever thank you?

Bahaha, Harry, putting on a show and strutting around because he defeated Voldemort and now everything else is easy peasy. I think he might've been bluffing just a bit. ^ ^ Oooh, but Auror Neville /is/ canon! Yep, JKR said that before he became an Herbology professor, Neville was an Auror with Ron and Harry. That's where I got the idea of this from.

Neville teasing Ron about the spiders was my favorite bit to write. :) So glad you liked it, and thank you so much!! I'm still flabbergasted that I won. I didn't expect to get more than the points for contributing to ten Gryffindor entries. I just wrote this for those points and for the fun of it, and am very pleasantly surprised at the outcome!

- Sarah

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