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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is fabulous!

I love eleven year old Lily, she is so innocent and loving. I also love how you made me dislike Petunia for making Lily upset. Its a hard situation for Petunia I guess because she was best friends with someone she'd probably cross the street to avoid and she's losing her sister. Petunia probably didn't know what to do but I do like how you've shown the hurt and rejection coursing through Lily. The fact she sends Severus away really shows that.

I also love how you have made her so mesmorised by the trolley just like Harry was on the first time. It shows that whilst some of the wizarding families would have been used to it, Lily was just getting used to the whole idea of the wizarding world let alone the different foods.

And she made a friend :D That makes me happy! Go amy for this wonderful piece!

Author's Response: The whole Lily and Petunia situation is so different depending on whose perspective you think of it from. There are so many feelings being covered up with other feelings and you just don't know what causes what. I tried to show Lily's whilst giving a slight insight into Petunia's potential feelings.
How Harry reacted to the new things he discovered is probably how every muggle-born feels, which is why I wrote Lily very similar.
Thanks for the review!

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