Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Deltaris says:
Your use of description is beautiful. You add little bits to the scene and phrases that aren't seen normally, and it creates a truly realistic world. It's very easy to imagine Cho in this.

I love how you show her only using a select group of spells. There is so much variety and chance with magic, it's almost disheartening that it comes down to only using certain spells.

I also like how you give the reason of the hunting of the Firebrands as being their value, instead of fear. It was also a great way to work in a few of the prompts, which you did without it feeling forced :)

Oh, Cho and Cedric. Besides briefly in Dumbledore's Army, we never really got to see how Cho dealt with the death of Cedric and how she moved on with her life. It's really touching that you show how she's never moved on from him, and how she still loves him. It really shows her loyalty and the depth of her love.

"Good morning Cedric." - gah, I wasn't really expecting that. And for it to be the first piece of dialogue, it really holds power. Her obsession truly is twisted, and heartbreaking.

For being rushed, this was fantastic. It was a bit dark, but really made me smile. I think you did a great job with this.

Del<3
Hufflepuff

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 707
Submit Report: