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Review:writeyourheartout says:
It's funny that the title of this story is Masterpiece, because this story, my dear, is a masterpiece.

I was introduced to this because it was on story seekers over at the podcasts and holy cow, does it deserve to be! I can't believe how few reviews this beautiful story has!

The way you open it is so stunning. Your way with words is unlike anyone else I've ever read on this site. And it's not just beautifully written, but incredibly relatable! You take this sophisticated style and somehow make it easily reach today's audience of young readers. The idea of being really good at one thing, but it's not the thing you wish you were good at? I think many people have been there. I've always wanted to be a better dancer, even though I can sing well. Wanting what you can't have is definitely something that pulled me toward this story.

I also love when you talk about how difficult it can be to be critiqued on the things that you aren't just having fun with, but taking very seriously as a career - a way of life. It's hard to hear bad things about that, because you sometimes feel like that's the only thing you have to offer and if someone doesn't even like that, then where does it leave you? So good.

The muggle spinning chair bit made me chuckle. Now that you mention it, I'm not sure I have seen a spinning chair mentioned in HP before... :-p

I love the exchanges about the different paintings and moods that influenced them. It's too true - I can't tell you how many random lyrics and one-liners I have saved in my email that I go back to and think 'Sheesh, what was I thinking about when I wrote THAT?' LOL

Anyway, the entire story is just incredibly written, with so many sentences that make me envy your skill and talent so badly! Congratulations on such a fantastic story!

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