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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Oh Amy! You're hilarious! You say you can never write humour but you honestly can.

The first thing I noticed was that the letter should have been in Italics. It was a little confusing as I believed that you were writing the story in 1st person but then when it changed to 3rd person I was like... what? But from then on I loved it.

Apart from including a tad more description to slow the pace down a little bit, such as maybe more discussion when Annie came in or more focus on her thoughts would have been good.

All in all I liked this though! It shows Lily taking on the two who had made her life a misery and I liked that!

Author's Response: Summer! But I really can't write humour! I suck at it!
Thanks for pointing that out! I can't believe I missed it! It's changed now :) Sorry for the confusion!
Description is always hard for me. I'm the sort of person who doesn't like to fluff things out; one of my biggest downfalls.
Thank you so much for the review!


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