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Review:firefly910 says:
*dances around* SIRIBETH SIRIBETH SIRIBETH *dances around some more*

Oh wow Sirius ♥ 'Yes, Sirius could makes this work' MY SHIPPER HEART!

I loved how you wrote that part. It was like a rom-com movie where one of the characters is all in anguish on the other side of the door because they want to go out and talk to the other person but they are scared.

OH WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?! How is Beth going to react when he makes a move? How is he going to react if she rejects him? What if she doesn't? What about Snape?


He doesn't want to be lonely and Beth has just come crashing into his arms at two in the morning and now he is thinking 'well maybe I could love her' and my heart is a puddle of feels *and breath*

The Sneth bit was good too. I mean she totally just threw aside the fact he killed a man and he has a dark mark and the fact that she's in The Order and she should be arresting him not promising to OWL him and then walking away with a huge grin on her face.

That's like sneaking out of your room at night to go meet the boy who has hundreds of tattoo's, owns a motorbike, smokes, drinks AND is older than you. GOOD LORD BETH WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!

The bit where she pulled his sleeve up was so darn intense! And he wants to find out why his patronus is a Thestral, I'm looking forward to finding that out myself.


Author's Response: I knew you would like this chapter! :D You are one of the largest Siribeth shippers, after all, although they are sort of growing in number. The most important thing to remember is that he DOESN'T love her -- not in that way. He is a very lonely person, and feels his best friend has replaced him, so he's trying to steal back a bit of that by pursuing things that don't exist where Beth is concerned. It is vital to remember that. :)

Beth and Severus are very human in that they are both making pretty stupid decisions right now by deciding to be together, and yet they're throwing away rationality (something quite highly valued by both) for each other, which actually says a lot about their relationship (hint, hint!). It's basically an idiotic choice to make, and yet their wants are outweighing their needs, if that makes any sense at all.

I think we got a little preview of why his patronus switched! :3 So, so glad you liked this chapter, and I'm eager to see your reaction to the one I'm about to post, too! Your reviews are seriously fabulous, Callie!!

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