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Review:firefly910 says:
Oh I loved this chapter!

Making Snape's patronus a Threstral is some kind of genius writing idea (that made NO sense). I don't think anyone else would have thought of doing that. It fits in with the story and Snape's character so that everything is kind of linked together even if they aren't explicitly linked (if you get what I mean there).

The Veritaserum bit was amazing. It's meant to make people spill their truths to everyone else not make the actual person drinking it see the truth. I am glad he's finally figured out why Beth was so mad at him. I wonder what he's going to say to her when she meets him at the bridge? Because he also realised that she is involved with something and that something might not be quite in line with what he himself is involved in.

I also like the fact you portray Snape as extremely clever. It isn't by a happy coincidence that he managed to fool Voldemort for all those years, getting into the highest circle of Death Eaters whilst still managing to remain someone who Dumbledore trusted as well. That's the one thing I can admire about his character, just how much he put himself on the line and how clever he had to be to pull that off for most of his life.

Author's Response: Don't worry, your sentence makes perfect sense! :) Making his patronus a thestral is an idea that largely came from a conversation with Sarah, but I'm really, really pleased with the way it turned out. And that a lot of other people seem to like the way it was done, too!

I don't know if it's canon to have somebody who is able to fight Veritaserum, but it seemed plausible with what we know of Harry's fighting the Imperius Curse, so I went with it. ;) Snape's SO clever, though, to have fooled Lord Voldemort for seventeen years -- I really wanted to get that across, as well. You just get this story!

Thank you so much, as always, for taking the time to leave me such lovely reviews. I'm honored to have you as a reviewer, and your opinion means a lot to me! ♥

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