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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Back for Chapter 2!

The opening flshback gave us some great insights into Perc's character. You managed to convey his smg prattyness (is that a word?) but make him sympathetic at the same time. And it also appears that he and Audrey as a couple were totally dysfunctional from the start, which seems fitting.

It's highly amusing how quirky and neurotic Audrey is, but I would just warn against going a little too overboard with it.

George and Ginny's prescence was highly amusing as well, and it seemed like a total younger sibling move to try to eavesdrop like that.

Looking forward to seeing how th news of the pregnancy effects them moving forward

Author's Response: Odd, only two people (you and someone else) called Audrey quirky, she is neurotic though.

I'm surprised your back, I will say that. I never pegged your for a pregnancy fellow. :) Thanks for the review though. :)

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