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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with your review!!

I really like this story! You do such a great job building the angst of the story. Especially when she enteres the room for her test. I felt so anxious for her.

I also really enjoy all the details that you provide about the dragons and all the task itself. I also really like the way you explain the use of dragons blood. It is really clever. You really have a way with words. The vocabulary is so well refined throughout the story.

I have never read a story about Susan before so this was quite a treat. Thank you so much for swaping with me! I look forward to reading more of your writing! =)


I am also going to add this to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you for coming by to review! A favourite, too! I wasn't expecting that, and it's wonderful to hear that you liked the story that much. :D

It's funny that, no matter how hard I try, I can't write a story without angst! Even when I start a happy story, it turns out to have some dark or painful twist. But I'm glad that it worked out for the better in this story!

It was tricky to fit in those prompts, particularly the uses for dragon's blood. I was worried maybe I'd forced it too much, breaking up the flow of the story, so it's a relief to hear that it fit in nicely.

Thank you again! I really appreciate hearing from you! :)

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