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Review:Cavell says:
You had me in the palm of your hand the moment you said Hamlet :p I can see the slight (very slight, don't worry) similarities between it, but for the most part you have made the story completely your own, even in the first chapter, and I completely admire that. I adore the idea of this - the Blacks seem like the type to rule over kingdoms and this was rather fitting to it all.

I can't for the life of me spot any mistakes. Some words I did have to look up (only two, tutelage and something else I can't remember) but that's all due to my poor knowledge, so I'm not holding you against that. It's all so sinister, this plot is, and I can't wait to see where you take it and you have completely gripped my interest. Sirius as a young child is so sweet and full of innocence and ah. I am itching to read the next chapter, but it would not be fair, so, you know, I'll have to wait - or I could just go ahead myself, but I want to finish this review first.

I have heard so much praise about this story, and pleasantly enough, it has far exceeded my expectations. You have a brilliant story under your belt, and your characters, Cygnus, in particular, all have the brains of any average 'Claw ;) (It's coming from a 'Claw, so feel free to take it as a compliment) I can't wait to see what Sirius thinks of it all, and when the other Marauders come in (my only complaint, though Sirius satisfied me enough) and just... wow. Gah.

My lack of eloquency aside, for my first AU story, it was pretty darn good ;) Good luck with the rest of the story, thanks for requesting, feel free to re-request, and well done :)

--Linn

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