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Review:ariellem says:
Hey, sorry for being so late, I ended up going somewhere and when I got back I saw your lovely reviews and scuttled over here immediately!

I really like the idea here, the moment where Sirius discovers that his best friend and his wife dead, that moment where he realizes that the only thing left is his son. It's pretty heartbreaking to think about.

The only thing I would point out is the usage of ~*~ and italics that would really help the reader adjust to the time jumps. Other then that, you're good!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story! I am glad that you enjoyed it!

I will definitely be going back and figuring out how to make the memory transitions better. Thanks for pointing it out and for the suggestions of italics!

I appreciate it very much!

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