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Review:Daanana says:
Oh my, I loved this. I really did. I held my breath throughout the entire piece. It almost felt like canon to me. Also, Narcissa only caring about her son is such a strong emotion.

Lucius' patronus, a peacock, is so fitting.

All in all, I loved the way you described things and your sentences flowed really well. I all read it all which usually is a problem for me, especially with one shots, since I tend to skip to the ending a lot, so yeah, 9/10 for this one.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked this so much, and that you found it close to canon, and felt Narcissa's emotions were strong about her son :)

I am happy you liked the peacock patronus too, I was a little worried about that part.

Yay! Thanks a lot. your review really made me smile :)

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