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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I figured I would leave another review because I really like the story!

I really liked Herman in this chapter. I really want Audrey to listen to him. She really doesn't know what is going to happen. He is right in being harsh to her. I also like how you take the serious moments and include humor too. Like Gloria. Oh my goodness... I laughed so hard at the thought of you know who going into the store to buy chocolate ice cream! Hahahahaha!! =) I also liked how she claimed to have once seen Merlin. That is just too funny.

I like the balance between serious and humor in this chapter. I also really like the way that it flows. You get this feeling that you are right there with them.

Keep up the awesome writing! I cannot wait for chapter 6!! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really was very nice of you.

Herman is realistic, Audrey is not, she feels he's being harsh but really he's right and she's wrong. However I am glad I created Gloria to lighten the mood.

:) Thanks again for the review!

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