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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with your review!

I really love this story and all the awkward moments. I really want Audrey to come around to Percy's offer, although, I can totally see where she is coming from.

I thought you did a really great job of hitting the nail on the head with the do not's of pregnancy. I can fully relate to the way that she responds to that list of foods and not being able to have what you want.

Audrey is very feisty and I think that is what is the most appealing about her. She isn't your normal girl. Percy sees that, but Audrey isn't quite sure about him.

I felt horrible for Percy at the end of the chapter. Having his family there must be really uncomfortable for him.

Keep up the awesome writing!!! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Poor Percy is right, for a while I thought Audrey was the award winner for most awkward, but Percy takes that home every time I write him.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the reviews!


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