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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
Ooh, I liked it! A little slow and a lot of exposition, but that's to be expected from any first chapter. =)

I didn't think Lici was annoying at all! I thought she was really funny and I can't wait to see how she interacts with the people at Hogwarts and what house she's in. (Gryffindor, perhaps?) She doesn't seem to be too fond of the people at Hogwarts besides Dominique, so that ought to be interesting. =)

Foster mother? I'm very curious as to what Lici's history is. She's certainly got a lot of interesting things happening in her life.

And haha, don't worry about your Spanish. The one phrase I know is 'la animadora es graciosa' so you've probably got me beat. ;)

Great story! I'll definitely be looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, you are my first review. I was expecting serious flaming, so this gives me a very good feeling!

Lici is actually in Slytherin, which comes out in the next chapter. I'm still working on that one because it got rejected a week ago but this is the first place I've had wifi in FOREVER so I'm only editing now.

Thanks for reviewing. If you'll excuse me, I have to go do a happy dance all around my room because of this!

Thanks again,
Simone


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