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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, I had already read this for review tag then someone tagged you before I was able to say I was Reading and reviewing. Anyway, I still wanted to leave this review, so here I am :).

You have completely mastered first person. And you stay consistent in your tenses, very good job!

This piece is entirely created on emotion and imagery. Something that could get boring if it wasn't written by such talented fingers.

This was far from boring, it was a very fluent and poetic piece that gives us a really good amount of information without it ever feeling like we doing anything but basking in their love.

I know when they started dating (roughly), I know that Hannah already owns the pub, they're engaged, she has a 7th year from Hogwarts working for her... just all these details that you let me discover through the beautiful pictures you pain.

I am quickly learning to like Neville and Hannah, and if I hadn't already began to then this one shot would have forced me to love them with the gentle yet fierce love she feels.

I like the idea that they are each others saviors, I think it speaks volumes for their characters.

I wish I could do more than give you gushy sentences, but I really love this and can't do much analyzing when my heart feels so happy and full thanks to this wonderful 500 word challenge (amazing use of those words, by the way)!

Amazing as always, darling!

Jami

Author's Response: It's so sweet of you to come by, Jami, even though you didn't actually get to tag me :)

This piece was definitely meant to be more poetic than plot-driven, like many of my one-shots, and I'm glad that the information still came through okay even with that style. I've never written Neville/Hannah before, but I think their ship is really cute, so I imagine that I might revisit them later in the future.

Thanks so much for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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