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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
I really like Clio so far. She has a snappy narrative voice and some very funny observations to share. I giggled at the idea of accepting the job even if it required washing Dumbledore's underwear ;). The American nickname for Voldemort also made me chuckle. I appreciate that your OC has a well-fleshed-out back story as well.

There were only a few errors in punctuation, spelling and capitalization; overall this was quite solid. The only error that really popped out at me was the spelling of Beedle the Bard. I know you were concerned about the summary but I wouldn't change a thing, I like it the way it is :)

This was fun to read and I look forward to more. Please feel free to re-request!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! I'm glad to hear you like it so far. I spent a lot of time thinking about her background (more of it gets revealed in bits & pieces) so it's good to hear that it's appreciated.

Thanks also for pointing out the misspelling of Beedle! I will have to go back and fix that at some point ...

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