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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Hello!

I've been meaning to read this since forever, and straight away it looks like so much fun! I'm so glad I've finally been able to jump into it, because I have heard so many good things about it! I love Fred, he's so funny and a great narrator. Everything about this first chapter is just so carefree and fun, down to the dramatic language and the hilarious situation.

I really like the way you've introduced us to the characters without going overboard at all. Each character is so unique and it's neat that they have their own roles and their own way or responding to each other, even if it is cheeky. I also really like that you've tied this in with the way families are really close in the wizarding world. I mean, his grandmother was super cute, but the reference to aunt Hermione and stuff - I can just imagine that family reunions are chatty and so full of life :D

I like the way this has a lot of dialogue, too - mainly because it's a radio show :P - but also because it lets you get really hooked and lost with it, so you feel like you're there. I love the way there are many-a gags and all of them come across as perfectly charismatic, but the fact that there is this carefree bubble makes me excited about later chapters and what is going to happen to kick this novel off :D

Laura xxx

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