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Review:Jchrissy says:
I absolutely love the concept of this. It's very sweet and innocent, she shows the deeper turns that we know their relationship will soon take. I think you did well with trying to build on imagery, especially towards the end.

It's very charming to see James use how cloak in such a sweet way, also.

I do think this could benefit from having a beta reader look over it. You have some random capitalizations, misplaced commas, and a beta could help to really smooth it out :)!

Great job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm especially proud of this one-shot, I never get any negative reviews on it that's for sure. I like showing things like this in my stories because it's the way I show my originality in a very popular couple.

Thanks for the advice, I'm starting to accept that when people say to get a beta doesn't mean that they didn't think your story was good, it's just how we help each other make our stories the best they can be.

Thanks so much for this review :D

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