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Review:academica says:
AWW. ♥ Bill is sick of being the welcoming wagon, and rightly so, with four brothers already! I love how he tried to show his parents that he was displeased while still feeling astonished that he was considered grown up enough to hold the new baby. (Wonder how he'll deal with a new baby sister?)

His little transformation is adorable, and I like that his displeasure was rooted in the fear of being forgotten. (After all, it's natural to think that your parents kept having boys because the first one they had wasn't satisfactory. Sad, but natural.) The ending to this chapter was so sweet - I love how Mr. Stuffing has become a theme, and how you use him to tie all of the Weasley children together.

A nice break from my usual angst. Lovely job :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Poor Bill -- I do think it would get rather tiring, seeing a little parade of red-haired siblings pass through your house. But then again, I have to be angry at him, because who DOESN'T love Ron? I suppose he doesn't know better, though. I loved the comment you made about a feeling that maybe the first few sons weren't good enough; that's so interesting, and I never thought about it in just those terms before. I love it when reviewers get me thinking!

Mr. Stuffing is a highly integral part to all of these one-shots; you'll see him in every chapter, basically. :D Thanks so much for taking the time to drop by here and leave me a review on this story! It's super appreciated! :)


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