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Review:manno_malfoy says:
This is so, so beautiful I almost teared up! Honestly! I've only read one other 500-word one-shot, and I'm still amazed by how you guys can write stories that are so emotional and convey such beautiful messages in less than a 1000 words! It's marvelling!

I loved how Ginny trusted him, how she knew that he could not have been cheating on her! Yet she was overpowered by her curiosity and found herself a way to get on his tail!

""Harry." She doesn't have to say anything else; she gives him everything - sympathy, frustration, sorrow, helplessness - in one word, two syllables, five letters."
I love this bit! I can hear Ginny's voice and her tone! It's just wonderful description!

The hug part was also very sincere and that's when things began to get emotional for me!

I really like the way you've characterised Harry! He sneaks around, trying to save whomever he can save; it's like he's worried Ginny would think he's silly or insane! But she understands! She understands that 'he just wants to be someone's hero again'!

The mood was set wonderfully and the sentences were meticulously composed to convey all the feelings, and there weren't any technical mistakes that distracted me from the story!

I absolutely loved this! It surely is one of my faves as of right now! Marvellous job and keep on writing!

-Manno

Author's Response: You are the sweetest! :D Honestly, I kind of like writing shorter pieces better than longer pieces, just because I feel like there's less of a chance of me screwing it up lolz. But thank you. I'm sure you could do it as well if you tried!

Eeeh thank you thank you thank you! Your wonderful compliments make me so happy. And, as sadistic as this sounds, I'm really pleased I almost made you tear up with this. I think this really is a sad sort-of hopeless story, all the more so because I can totally see canon Harry actually doing it >_< Poor Harry.

Anyway, thank you so much for this lovely review! I have the biggest smile on my face right now, you have no idea. And you favorited it! Gah. You rock. Thanks again! (:

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