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Review:EverDiggory says:
Finally, FINALLY here with your review!:D Sorry, I'm usually pretty on-top of my thread

Characterization: I love this, its a strong suit of yours! Even though its not in the 1st person, you've still managed to capture the characters and their emotions well!

Flow: The entire story was smooth and the transitions were fine. The acts that I thought messed with it in the before chapter weren't as noticeable this time, which is good!

Reader Interest: I really am interested in it, even though this isn't what I used to consider my cup of tea. Anyone who doesn't even read this genre, will surely enjoy this because you wrote it in such a way that it doesn't matter. I really enjoy this!

Plot: I love it! I love the incorporation of some many characters in the subtlest of ways! it really is interesting how you keep the characters in -character/canon/whatever you wanna call it, while still bending them to your plot!

Grammar/Spelling: This is fine, of course!

General Overall: I thoroughly enjoy this story! Its so unique and well thought out, its just intriguing and I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: No worries, Ever! Thanks for getting around to it. :)

Ah, I feel like I've written the Marauders so much that writing them just comes naturally to me. So to hear that my characterizations are such a strong suit means a lot to me. I'm definitely not a first person POV writer (third person is a personal favorite, though I should probably branch out more...) so it's important to me that emotions and actions still come across.

I'm glad everything seems to have smoothed out in the second chapter. I'm getting a little better with the transitions so hopefully future chapters are even better.

Thank you for taking the time to r&r even though you're not a huge fan of the concept. :)

Haha, yes...while it's AU, I definitely want to keep them as canon as possible. That's definitely important to me because I want you to recognize the characters, you know?

Thank you so much. I'm really happy you like it and that you're enjoying it so much. :)

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