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Review:StormThief17 says:
Hey, StormThief here with your review!

I think you did a very nice job of characterizing Remus again. His gratitude towards his friends and disbelief is very real, and I think very in character. I think the other boys were also well done. The wolf is great! I think the emotions and feelings he portrays are excellent, and I loved the whole pack mentality he has. The scene where he tried to feed the animals rabbits was really funny!

The grammar is fine, and it flows very nicely from the wolf's POV to Remus'. One minor mispelling--"deaf" instead of dear. Overall I think you did a great job! Although I would love to read more, I think this is a nice closure to the story. Great job!

Author's Response: Hey there! Blegh! I'm so sorry that I've taken a LONG time to respond! RL is kicking my behind!

I'm glad that you think that Remus was still in character. The bit where he finds his friends was really tough to write since I wanted him to be real mad but that would've have happened with Canon-Remus since he never really spoke his mind. The pack is the heart and soul of this story. It shows how Wolf gains a pack, loses a pack, and other things I don't want to reveal just yet... :)

I'm SO glad you thought that bit with the rabbit was funny! Its definitely hard trying to do humor without dialogue, that's for sure!

I'll go ahead and change that bit of a misspell. Thanks for pointing it out!! I appreciate it!

There will be more! Hopefully...so you'll see what happens next and I hope that you still like it!

--Rosie

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