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Review:Aether says:
Hi, this is Aether here from the forums with your review!

This is utterly adorable. I'm panicking now because I just realized it's over, and I have nothing critical to say about it! The flow of this one-shot is fantastic.

You are a great writer. I love how you portray James Potter in this. I like how you include both the Potters and the Longbottoms in this story. :) What a brilliant idea!

The only negative thing I felt was that I feel Lily and Alice come off as very similar characters. :) As a matter of personal preference, I might've liked to have seen, not only how the couples are similar, but also how they're different. It's just a thought that's now occurred to me after the fact.

Really excellent job on this one-shot! 10/10

Aether

Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you! No! Don't panic! Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Truthfully, I"m not the best writer of fluff (ANGST ALL THE WAY) so I'm glad you liked it :D

A great writer? *fangirling on the floor* Thank you so much!

Thank you for the CC, if I ever write another story like this I'll keep that in mind :D

Jasmine

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