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Review:Puzzled Reader says:
This story has the same problem most of anti-canon stories have. In your effort to force a pair together (F/Hr in this case) you decided that the best way to do it was by portraying the other guy as the bad guy.
Why there is always must be a bad person? I'm reading a lot of fics. Whenever I read a story that has Hermione with someone other than Ron, Ron in the 99% of the fics, is a complete bastard! I don't get it.

Let's talk about your story. Obviously this story is Fremione, but my question is, if Ron is such a bastard then what are we even talking about? Obviously the good will prevail and Hermione will learn how bad person Ron really is, and she'll realise that her one true love is Fred.

That's more than fine, but why couldn't Ron be a good guy too? Why you had to transform him into a Malfoy? Why he had to be a cheater, a manipulator, someone who hates his own brother or blackmail his own sister and I don't know what else! Probably in the next chapters we'll learn he's also alcoholic, drug addict, raper, paedophile, he beats Lavender and many more "compliments".

Wouldn't be more epic if Hermione actually had to choose between 2 really good guys that love her equally, but she loves Fred? Now, with Ron such a bastard, there is no excitement of how this story is going to end. All we have to do is wait for Ron to get caught and that's it! I'm just asking...

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