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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
To start off my review, I would like to applaud you for selecting such an uncommon character as your protagonist. You seem to have created such a solid character for Molly, which readers can relate to. You did a wonderful job with regards to characterization.

Additionally, I found no major spelling or grammar mistakes, so good job.

Now, moving on to plot. This chapter was relatively short and did not seem to have much plot. I think you skipped over some potential areas where additional plot could be added, especially during the party.

Overall, nice job and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I deffinently felt that too! Thanks for the help!

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