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Review:water_lily43175 says:
Ma favourite chapter!

It's actually horrendous to think of poor old Nat, in Azkaban the whole time...

I like that Tanith understands why Cal did what he did. Even if it's effectively because of him that she's now in Azkaban. Because he really DIDN'T have a choice here.

I actually find it really FUNNY, that Tanith is so adamant that Tobias won't fall for the trick, that he'll realise that it's not Tanith... When he didn't. Well, he WAS noticing things, but he hadn't quite put two and two together! Men.

I do love that Tanith PICKS THE LOCK in Azkaban! But so true that they wouldn't ward against it! I need to learn this trick...

Ungh I LOVE the bit where Tobias just controls lightening like a BOSS. So good! I think my reaction would be similar to Cal's if I were there. IMMENSE.

Jen's patronus is a lion. OF COURSE IT IS. I love her.

I also love Dimitri. Amazing. And Tobias: "it's okay, I broke it." YES.

T/T MOMENT YES LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Basically, I REALLY like this chapter...

Author's Response: Yeah, Nat's life clearly SUCKS. There had been a sequence in the chapter where Tanith went to visit her Dad where she ran into Nat, who was completely out of it from being incarcerated all this time... but I decided to be nicer. She'll need some time but isn't going to be Above and Beyond in terms of psychological scarring.

Tanith might be inclined to blame Cal for stuff when she's losing control, but ironically in a crisis she's more likely to keep her head. Also, since Cal's been on the run for months it's harder to accuse him of/worry that he's being manipulated by Thanatos unknowingly. I also think her conviction that Tobias won't believe Ariane is more wishful thinking! And the lockpicking definitely wouldn't have been possible without the Dementors; I think they would make an excellent security provision against breakouts just because the concentration and determination would be incredibly difficult and so why have too many other precautions? As per Sirius breaking out relatively easily once he wanted to.

Tobias getting to be super-awesome here is something I wanted to do for a long, long time. It was literally one of the first scenes I envisioned in Shadow. I suppose now he will never get to be as awesome, in his life, as he is in this moment. It's all downhill from here! Except that he gets the girl, so I reckon he's doing okay. ;)

Jen might be smart and cautious and capable of looking at the bigger picture, but she is so MUCH a Gryffindor, so much the one to stand up and face the music and be the protector as well as courageous, that I couldn't envision anything else as her patronus. She's there to prod buttock and take names. Her patronus was way easier to figure out than Cal's and Tobias'. ;)

Ta for reviewing!


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