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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Oh, this is brilliant! I was smiling throughout the whole thing, and laughed a bit, which is a good thing! Peter and his cheese, Sirius and his muggle fighting skills, and Lily and James' sexual tensions, Remus not wanting to partake in a brawl, Snape and his overgrown bat self. This was great!

My favorite line;
"Do you want some cheese?" Ha! That was so irrelevant! But I loved it all the same.

And I enjoyed how you tied in Pat Benatar's song. It fits well. Great one-shot. It was simple, but it was greatness.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Yeah, it was irrevelant but I couldn't just have Peter sitting there not doing anything, he was part of the Marauders so he would have had to talk to them :p
Yes, I love Pat Benatar, I wish I was an 80s kid :(
Thank you so much for reviewing :D

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