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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
Great story! Lily's character was so vivid and real. She was funny with the perfect mixture of naivete as a child. Her reactions seemed perfect to everything that was going on around her for an eleven year old.

Her interactions with the other characters were lovely! I can't wait to see what else she does with James and the other Marauders.

One note on the spacing, you don't need to indent the paragraphs if you add spaces between them. =)

And Lily curtsying was about the cutest thing ever. I bet James gives her grief about that later on.

I can't wait to see more of what she does at Hogwarts! Fantastic start!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just loved reading your review :) It made me smile.. I was trying to put some of my eleven year old self into it, and I was told that when I was tiny I would curtsy and I thought that would be something she could do because it looked cute when I did it as a little girl.

The spacing was really difficult for me because of how it formats it. I will try and get a chapter up soon. I have been having a tough time writing more, because I have been rather sick and unable to concentrate. I will try my hardest :)

Thank you so much for your review, and I really appreciated it :) Sometimes, all you need is a review to get you back on your feet

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