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Review:radicallyali says:
PS Iím saving 30 days for last because I love me some ScoRose.

If dragons could be cute, I would say that Captain is cute.

Good ol Charlie Weasley.

The amount of activities to do in the colony could be counted on one hand. Besides eating in the caf, reading in our bunks, or sneaking in to see other dragons, the choices were limited
That sounds AWFUL I would hate my life within a month.

Seventeen held Brian, a Romanian Longhorn with thick scales and fierce eyes. Half the walls were charred.
This isnít going to end well is it?

Charlie says itís related to Brian
Yeah not going to end well at all.

And ice cream Fridays
BALLER.

I think you did a really good job of including the prompts. Nothing stood out jarringly, they all made sense in their places.

For you, this was really short. I kept expecting a lot more detail and for it to be longer, because well, Iím used to BTQC and H&S, but I liked it and thought it was cute. I could definitely see this being a short story though. But I liked it. =]

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter :)

Don't you love the dragon name Brian? Dying.

I am SO awkward about how short this is. It HAD to be under 2500 words. I was so weird. I had to cut a lot too.

Thanks!


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