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Review:pennyardelle says:
W.W.W.W.W! :D

Wonderful job on your entry! I was amazed at how well you were able to traverse the different moments of Cho's life in such short space without it feeling rushed. The mix of third and second person POV was also really showcased your skills as a writer. I loved the way you managed to integrate the prompts--some as actual plot devices, but also some as metaphors or figures of speech.

Overall, I thought it was just fantastic that you managed to turn the prompt of using a dragon into something so symbolic and beautiful.

Author's Response: ;)

Baww. I'm literally blown away by all of the amazing entries and am still trying to process the fact that my off-beat sort of story was chosen. The writing talent at HPFF is out of this world!! I am very proud of this one-shot, but as I read other task entries I worried b/c mine was more stylistic than narrative -- so it's fabulous to hear that my use of prompts still /worked/ despite some of them being figurative.

The character of Cho is so under-explored in fanfiction that I really wanted her to have a defining moment, and somehow, soaring into the sky with all the majesty and greatness of a dragon followed from there. Wheter or not you take her transformation as a literal one or not is up to you! But that, I think, is the magic of the HP-verse... there is so much freedom to explore and create.

Gah, I can't even tell you how grateful I am for your review. As I said, I've been very nervous about this story since it's a little different from the other entries, but I'm very glad that you found it to be an enjoyable read!! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a review!

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