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Review:pennyardelle says:
Hi Violet! Great job on your entry! I loved that you showed Susan trying to become a dragon keeper, and I thought she came off as being really resilient and strong in this chapter.

I really liked the description of her near the start of the chapter, with the contrast between her physical appearance and then the inner strength we see throughout the rest of the chapter. I also thought the moment where Dedalus sees her scars, and it brings up memories of the past for her, was particularly poignant.

Author's Response: Thank you, Penny! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, particularly the portrayal of Susan. I wanted her to be a very strong character, assured of herself, but still wanting to prove to others that she, tiny and Hufflepuff, was still worth betting on. She's not like other characters I've written before, so it means that much more to hear that she turned out well. :D

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