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Review:pennyardelle says:
Hi DarkWhisper! Nice work on this entry for Task One. :) It was interesting to see a story about one of the Founders in isolation from the others--usually you see a Godric vs. Salazar sort of theme, or a love triangle. I also liked that you wrote it so founding Hogwarts was Salazar's idea. That's an unexpected and unique spin (or maybe I just don't read Founders stories enough :P).

I felt like the fact that Sarcone's plan backfired on him because of his own doing was very Shakespearean--kind of reminded me of Macbeth for some reason!

Author's Response: Dearest,

Dost my eyes deceive me? But 'tis the famous and noble pennyardelle of the Forum that hast reviewed my story? Me thinks that 'tis I, unworthy of such a thing as this.

Humbled am I to see your words of kindness and splendor on the happening of my story.

'Twas an honor to be nominated by the noble and great House of Slytherin to represent and such great fun in participating in a task that challenged me afar away from my normal writs of Dramione romance.

'Flourishing in the face of adversity' 'twas the prompt that inspired brother vs. brother for the deed of Hogwarts.

Ah, the many uses of the blood of the most noble beast of myth and lore deserved to be plot point and of dire importance and worth more than mere mention.

And oh, the demise of young Sarcone... Shakespearean indeed. THANK YOU! Your generous and gracious compliment 'tis like none other.

Perhaps an older dialect for the story would've been a better choice, but time and word count permitteth not.

With all intended seriousness, I thank thee for your time, your words, and for reviewing a story when you didn't have to.

My utmost and sincerest thanks as I doth take my bow and be humbled before you.

Dark Whisper

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