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Review:Remus says:
Perelandra here with your second review!

I suppose I'm on a Pre-Hogwarts mood lately!

This story is just too cute! I absolutely love Alice's nervousness. I could even feel her reluctance on telling Frank about what was making her nervous. Her characterization is great as well. Very, very believable.

The narrative and description were brilliant as well. It managed to suck me right in and couldn't stop reading.

Lily and James crack me up. I can really hear him say something about divorcing Lily to marry her dishes.

You have great flow that allows the reader to just sit back and relax.

I'm craving a cup of tea now thanks to you! You should totally continue with one more chapter about the two of them giving birth! XD

Thanks for the swap!

--Perelandra

Author's Response: Thank you! Pre-Hogwarts is awesome!

Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

GO AND HAVE A CUP OF TEA! NEVER SAY NO TO TEA!

Jasmine


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