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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here with the review swap! :D

I'm a real sucker for 'James and Lily die and Remus/Sirius mourn" stories. They're always heart breaking!

The only complaint that I have is that it was way too short! :( I wanted to read more of it.

I absolutely love Sirius' despair and guilt over Lily and James' death. The line "Sirus wept the tears that James and Lily couldnít cry themselves." really got me teary eyed. Nice, wording. You could really feel his emotions on this.

The only CC that I have to give is that you keep misspelling Sirius' name. This fic and the one that I reviewed the crossover with the Hunger Games you have 'Sirus" instead of 'Sirius." You're missing the second 'i'.

Thanks for the swap! Now I'm going to find another story from your large collection to review. :D

--Perelandra

Author's Response: Hey!

They really are the best stories aren't they? The stories that are just: beginning, angst, angst, angst, end. haha.

I wanted to write more but after I finished it was only that long and so I entered it into the 'every words counts' challenge. I have to admit that it's my favourite challenge!!!

Woops :/ *runs away to fix that up* thanks for pointing that out!

Jasmine


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