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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey Amy hunny!

I must say this was the swetest submission of all! There is just something too cute about little Neville that makes you want to hug him eternally. Too bad we know how shy he becomes for a while. Fortunately, that didn't last long!

Especially happy about how you managed to include all of the prompts without making it look forced at all. Great job with that. Not to mention the whole innocent and loving feel of the story. I know you struggled a lot to find an idea and I must say that this is one of the best you could have come up with.

Author's Response: Hey!!
Aww, thanks! I loved writing little Neville so much! To be honest, just writing little kids is fun! You can just be childish and stupid :P I did try to set it up so that you could understand why Neville ended up the way he did a bit more.
Getting the prompts in was hard. I just went with the idea of writing and including anything that could possibly come up when doing it, but making it flow at the same time. I'm glad I did it well! The main reason I struggled was because I wanted to make it different to how I thought everyone else would do it, but I'm so happy I thought of this since I think it turned out better than I thought!
Thank you so much for the review!!


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