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Review:apocalypse says:
Hey! This is apocalypse, here with your review! Sorry, this has taken me a bit long to come over and type, I've been busy with other stuff. :) Anyway, now that I'm here, I'll simply get on with it.

Okay, firstly, I don't normally read crossovers for the simple reason that I'm not familiar with some fandoms. The ones you mentioned in your request, to be honest, I'm not familiar with half of them. Though I have read the Inheritance books so I think I'll be able to give you a fair enough review about that. :)

Firstly, I think you've done a pretty good job with the entire plot! I was really intrigued by the whole and since Paolini did not really elaborate on Angela's story, your idea really caught me on and made me wonder how you saw her. I must say that making her immortal was a pretty good idea. Your back story of Angela explains everything that happened around her in the original books so I really enjoyed reading this! Great job!

Solembum! :P I've always loves that werecat. I loved reading his parts in this chapter, you maintained his personality pretty well so great job there too! :)

I like the way you made the Doctor enter her life again. It was smooth and pretty well written. I don't think I understood what happened there in the end but I sure can tell you that it brought on the sense of doom and helplessness that stuff like that usually brings. Really good job with the dialogue!

Overall, it's a pretty good story but I'm afraid I didn't really follow the Doctor Who part. :) I hope this review helps you in some way. You can feel free to re-request but I must warn you that I won;t be able to give a good review if I'm not familiar with the fandom. I'll only be able to stick to the grammar, dialogue, flow and such.

Until next time, Good Luck and Happy Writing! :D

-Cal

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