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Review:manno_malfoy says:
I don't know what to say really but I must first congratulate you on always being able to write things so beautifully! I know for a fact that description is hardly a problem for you and you've shown that very well in this story. You made us feel that everything is real and vibrant around her -I especially liked the rock part where she knew her hands would be red and all... It really felt authentic.

But then, weird things began to pop up, like Cedric's wand and I began to question the reality of the whole situation. I'm not sure if I'm right or not about this not being real -I am not sure how it could be a dream yet be so elaborate and sensible, but I'm sure there's a more logical explanation... Maybe a Pensieve?

I think I'll keep on trying to figure it out anyway!

Also, I liked the bit where you made her begin to 'flourish in the face of adversity' through remembering the special moments she and Cedric had shared. It really is sweet and somewhat romantic!

Anyway I do believe that you've done a marvellous job on this entry and that there certainly is something about it -the ambiguity of its theme, perhaps- that distinguishes it from others'!

-Manno

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I tried really hard not to put too much description in this one to keep it within the required wordcount, you know.

Yeah, it is a bit weird. I didn't notice that at all until a couple of people pointed it out to me and I looked back over it with that in mind and was like 'oh,yeah' :P I wrote it assuming that it was real - Cedric's wand was really there (I think the little backstory-type-thing in my head said that it was given to her by Cedric's parents after his death), but from comments, I think you can interpret it either way you like ;)

It was sweet - I surprised myself with that, tbh. I don't normally write anything near that sweet and romantic O.o

Thank you so much for this lovely review, and I'm so sorry for the (extremely) late reply!

Aph xx


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