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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Yay! An emotional, dark-ish entry! I really am having too much fun going through everyone's stories!

This was a really nice story, and it seemed very realistic to me -even though it was mostly a dream. The way things went fuzzy and the Blast-Ended Skrewt all of a sudden turned into a dragon then shrunk down again really made it feel like a nightmare. I love how you've put in many of the prompts, especially the one about the uses of dragon blood! And the transfiguration spell! This bit was completely awesome!

I've noticed though that, in that very same part, you've mentioned twice how the dragon's blood could be useful further on in the maze. I know you had to rush yourself through writing the story to get it in before the deadline, but I thought I'd point that out in case you decide to come back and edit or something as such.

As for the idea of the story itself, that she would dream about the stories that must have travelled around Hogwarts after the tournament, is really nice and makes Cho one of those Ravenclaws who have an overly-active imagination and subconscious -I think many of us are like that, considering how we, supposedly, are into literature and dreaming up things and all...?

Anyway! Great job on the entry! W.W.W.W.W!

-Manno

Author's Response: Hey Manno!

Thank you so much for reviewing! Your review was so much longer and more detailed than mine have been. :o I HATE rushing through reviews, but there were so many stories to read that I had no choice. :/ Bummer.

Anyhow, I'm so happy you liked what I came up with. After reading everyone else's stories, I'm not as confident with it...it was a completely new way of writing for me, so I don't know if it came across as well as I would have liked.

Either way, I appreciate your feedback, and I'll fix that error when I edit. :] Thanks for pointing it out!

--Emily


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