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Review:blackangelwings says:
WOAH. I mean, that was unexpected. I thought it was going to be a girl, you know? But then reading it I guessed it was Fred. And like, I'm kind of glad it was him, you know? Because like, yeah. It would be a bit odd if like, Albus or Lily started hanging about her, wouldn't it?

Anyways, I liked this chapter. It was really well written and yeah, I liked how you didn't say what person's point of view, you know? 'Cause you still managed to make sure it wasn't completely unobvious who it was, yeah?

Also, you're starting to force one of the Wotter's into growing up and to notice that everything isn't all hunky-dory and whatnot. I like that.

I'm kind of hoping Fred accidentally let's it slip about all of the cuts and everything, you know? 'Cause I don't think Lena would be able to tell him because of how selfless she is. But that would probably make James angrier because Free knew before him, even if Lena didn't tell Fred. Yeah.

UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: It was a difficult choice, but somwhere in the back of my mind I always knew Fred would know first, ya know? And I'm not ready for Rose. Not just yet. I don't think ANYONE will ever be ready for her...it had to be someone who is always about, but close to James, Freddy is perfect in my mind. And I really like him. He's my favourite character thus far.


I'm glad you liked that, I wanted it to be a surprise. I almost left out his name altogether, but I didn't want to go down the path.

It's time to grow up. For them at least. They've lived shielded and under the cover of their parents all their lives. It's time.

All in due time, lovely. You do have a knack for guessing what path everything goes on though!(:

I have Microsoft Word open as we speak, I promise! Thank you as always!

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